Friends Were Supposed to be Forever....

[WoRdLoVer]

Okay guys, this is a better story! I hope you like it!!!

Friends Were Supposed to be Forever...

By: WoRdLoVer

"You can't do this for me. You can't." I screamed. My heart was beating fast, as I started to cry from

the pain. "This is the only way you'll have a good life and live." My friend Vanessa cried. I sat on was

laying

down on my hospital bed, bleeding. Vanessa and I have the same blood type. I was caught by

kidnappers, they stabbed me a lot and then my friend found me. The doctor said the only way to stop

it was to get a whole body of blood. (I just made that up...I don't know if its true) I was running out of

time as more and more blood poured out of me.

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I was rushed to the emergency room next to my friend Vanessa. Vanessa! Why are you doing this!? I

would rather die than for you to risk your life... Lots of tears were running down my face. After that, I

blacked out.

Several hours later, I woke up with my parents asking me if I was alright. I nodded but there were a

few little pains everywhere. I rubbed my eyes and was thinking. "Vanessa! Where's Vanessa!!!!????" I

asked loudly.

"Ellie, she's......-" My mom hesitated. "She's dead." My lips started to quiver. Then, I bawled.

"Why did she do this? Why did she??? She's gone....... No. I don't believe that. She WILL come back.

She's my best friend. We were supposed to go to college together.....Her birthday was tomorrow..." I

said remembering everything.

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I remembered everything. My best friend is dead.......... Happy Birthday, Vanessa. I looked up at the

sky. "Thanks for saving my life." I said quietly.

15 years later........ I was 30 years old. I had a kid. I named her...Vanessa.

"A true friend never gets in your way unless you happen to be going down." -Arnold H. Glasow

THE END! You like it? Sorry it was such a short story. There will be more to come! Sorry some of it was violent!!

[hansome boy 1]

Thats a good story.... keep up the good work!

[WoRdLoVer]

Thanks!

[Zoe Autumn]

Just one thing you should probably revise;
If she was 30 six years later, she would have been 24 when that happened. Most people go to college at 18/19 unless they get held back or skip grades.
Other than that, it's a good story! Keep writing! c:

[WoRdLoVer]

Ok, I just fixed it.