another poem...what ya think?

[WoRdLoVer]

WOW. YOU. SHOULD. BE. A. POET!

[cherry doll]

I kinda think I am lol m.m
what do you like the most about my writing word?

[cherry doll]

I find peace in the pieces of the chaos i chose to ignore
the reasons I obscure to fit the canvas of my life before
I cannot erase sins scraped over pale skins like drapes
fastened by a shallow glass of seasoned grapes
too anxious to taste the fruits of my mistakes
I'm here in name only i cannot maintain
focus or sobriety until i break the chains
of the ghosts of me,mirrored and times three
the insecurities that rules my life from A to Z
without any room to breathe
so take me where Im pardoned from exhaling
without the worries of failing or falling
far from forming words through my clenched teeth
I yearn to speak...finally saving me

[cherry doll]

here is a poem I wrote about religious intolerance with one another where we don't try to understand each other,we only judge according to our own prejudices and outlooks on life...just a rant really but tell me what you think k =]

Mistake our misshaped faces for happy grins when wisdom doesnt reach
when pride climbs and divides when given free range to teach
pitting brother against mother in battles of pride and faith
I feel the air collapse when words fall on deaf ears
Attributed to the Divine when he speaks his riddled speech

each in their own grand escape never meeting in mid day to choose the middle way
and ease the hurricane of fear that empowers the intolerance we face
unassumingly underestimating and refusing life
for an everlasting ever after
always after after ...after...today

reenter the rush tumbling through passed hands of tolerance
and merited to truthful stares and rants of insanity
because no one is perfect,it just shows our humanity
understanding the fabric of ourselves woven in seperate bodies
perfectly put together by something far beyond me
yet reason escapes each breath we take for time we pridefully erase
and a plot twist we cannot face since change is scarier to the human race
than the end result of grace
forget everything written,delete and backspace,to the first word "MISTAKE"

[bobthebobking]

I really liked The Knowing ^.^ It has a nice flow to it <3

[cherry doll]

why thank you...it came from my heart <3