Make your own poem!

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Ok so i just made this to see how creative people are, and to show how creative they are i made this forum game. Even though its not really a game, i think its going to be fun!

Ok so here are the rules!

1. Create your own poems. It can be about anything. Friends, family, love, death etc.

2. If you want, you can make a comment or a question about the poem above you.

3. Have fun!

Ok so imma go first. We had this homework that we had to write our own poem so here it goes. Please tell me about your opinion.

"Are they my Friends?"

Are they my friends?
Who make me laugh
Who make me smile
But do they notice
that those laugh and smile
are fake?

Are they my friends?
Who talk to me
Who hangs out with me
But leaves me
when i am stranded on an island?

But those are not my friends
My friends notice when i am sad or lonely
When i need help they stay by me
Those are my friends
I hope

Spoiler Alert!

Please give me your feedback

[BackGround]

Shouldn't this be posted in the Writer's section? ._.

I dunno.....

[Scairry]

Yeah, it should be, let me take care of that
Seems like more 'writing and poetry' than a forum game. I mean it is a game. Buuuut, it might get more attention in the writers and poets section.

[LiStYtRoN]

Theres no need to be fake,
it makes my heart break.
When a friend can forsake,
is it a mistake?
or a phoniness outbreak.
If you prove to be a flake,
I must take you to the lake.
Where your lungs shall intake,
and your eyes will turn opaque.
Now a *new* friend I must make,
all because.. you were fake.

[Scairry]

You shine, you shimmer, doth you not?
The sparkle, the sheen, I love it a lot.
But why, oh why, do you have to hide?
From me, you are, a prized possession of mine.
I find it a hassle, to be your indentured servant,
But I don't really mind, because you allow me to be observant.
I see you splish, I see you splash,
Within your habitat, in which you match.
You're such a precious, sight for sore eyes,
Dashing, and darting, I've brought for you, a surprise!
You find her so beautiful, such a lovely creature to see.
Your brand new woman, your mate, the one in which you will breed.

-From me, to my twice-widowed male guppy Kiwi.
*snaps fingers*

[LiStYtRoN]

he didnt eat has past 2 spouses.. did he? (mine ate her own babies)

[Scairry]

he didnt eat has past 2 spouses.. did he? (mine ate her own babies)

No, he didn't eat the past 2 spouses. The first one (Strawberry) probably died because of improper water temperatures.. But she had 12 baby guppies with Kiwi as the father before she died. So, her kin live on. Then we got him a new love.. But I don't think he was interested in her.. And she kinda just died one day too. We just got him a new one today that looks kind of like himself. lol. But fan tailed instead of lyre-tailed like Kiwi. Annnnd they're super interested in each other. On another note, there are 9 or 10 baby guppies still alive and growing (They've got a little color even). Looking forward to more! Strawberry.. We removed her from the babies when we noticed that she had them, and I think 12 is a good batch for playing by sight.

[LiStYtRoN]

you were my friend once upon a time,
we had fun, life was sublime.
I would drop food into your tank,
and watch as it slowly sank.
you would swim in circles for years,
anyone would think you had some beers.
but you were an awesome pal,
I did not know you were a gal.
untill your belly swelled with a litter,
then you ate them and made me bitter!
how dare my pet eat its own,
I knew you were evil, you must atone!
on your own you shall be now,
you silly old fishy cow.

[Halo_Hero]

NICE poem Listy.
check me!

I give you peanuts and
watch you fly!
I sit on tree,
while you (pee).
Another Chip comes
but its only a photo.

[LiStYtRoN]